Low Sun Blinding My Winter Eyes

Low sun blinding my winter eyes
Blind me away sun, blind me away
Low sun struggling at a cold sunrise
Blind my winter eyes

One more day without my love
One more day on planet earth
The grass below and the sky above
One more death and one more birth

Little bird singing her morning song
Sing me away bird, sing me away
Little bird singing out loud and long
Sing your morning song

One more death and one more birth
The grass below and the sky above
One more day on planet earth
One more day without my love

Fire burning on a cold hearthstone
Burn me away, fire, burn me away
My hands are warm but my heart is alone
Fire burn this stone

Note:

I wrote this song for the FAWM (February Album Writing Month) songwriting challenge.

4 thoughts on “Low Sun Blinding My Winter Eyes

  1. Delightful imagery and phrasing. The repetition works very well and the structure is perfect for a piece like this. To me it reads like a ballad. Very well done.

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